I was able to easily connect with this experience and felt saddened by the description and the emotion of the poem. It made me think about how often this would happen. Excellent poem!
Your poem can probably be related to by a lot of people. It allows me to understand what you go threw as someone who goes unseen and can only show there true emotions when their alone. There is a great depth of emotion in your poem.
This poem is both extremely deep and interesting. It gives me some insight into your experience in the world and I can connect to it. Since I have so many siblings it can feel as if my parents don't pay much attention to my accomplishments. I liked how you used your room as a place where you can hide your emotions. This was a really good poem.
I like how you were able to give insight into your life, through a simple poem. I like the clear description and vivid imagery, while still making it possible for people to connect to. I like how you used your room as a metaphor, as that helps people relate to the poem
This is an excellent poem, your uses of emotion and feeling made this one of my favorite poems. I enjoyed reading it, and thought your use of intense wording like "survive", and "dark depths" made this an emotional, and amazing poem. Amazing work!
I think your poem showed a lot of emotion and it also showed something a lot of the readers can probably relate to, it gave us a small personal insight to your life and it shows how people lock away their feelings. Very deep, Nice job =)
This poem made me so sad...the last two lines are really vivid, and they really work to allow the reader in. When I was young, I needed a lot of attention, and to this day, I need a lot of attention. My wife Martha is very different, and really enjoys time to herself and being by herself. As a result, I do things to make her notice me, and so I get the weird feelings that come with being ignored by people you love. This is really a beautiful poem.
I liked how you described your reality and how you don't get much attention. I could relate to this because when I'm ignored, I feel really sad. Good job describing how you felt, but you seem like a very outgoing and funny person, I don't see how you could be ignored. I loved your poem! Great job Lucy!
This poem allowed me to undergo what you feel like sometimes. It brings back memories when I feel disappointed in myself, but everyone can connect to it. Great job!
being the older child it seems like I dont have that connection but there are some times when my parents just completely forget about me because they feel like my sister is the more important one in those situations. but alot of the time my parents ignore both of us but to help us do better in life. Your poem was nice and I liked the concept of it
This really had a deep meaning to you, which helps the reader understand what you're saying. First of all, thank you for expressing this sad, vulnerable part of yourself to us through your poetry because that couldn't have been easy. This kind of gives me a sense of depression which is really hard to express to others and it shows a side you don't usually show to others.
I can connect with this one because my parents often say they love me but then they act differently and my brother is always the center of attention and i am always just the outcast in the family even though i love them to death.
I was able to easily connect with this experience and felt saddened by the description and the emotion of the poem. It made me think about how often this would happen. Excellent poem!
ReplyDeleteYour poem can probably be related to by a lot of people. It allows me to understand what you go threw as someone who goes unseen and can only show there true emotions when their alone. There is a great depth of emotion in your poem.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is both extremely deep and interesting. It gives me some insight into your experience in the world and I can connect to it. Since I have so many siblings it can feel as if my parents don't pay much attention to my accomplishments. I liked how you used your room as a place where you can hide your emotions. This was a really good poem.
ReplyDeleteI like how you were able to give insight into your life, through a simple poem. I like the clear description and vivid imagery, while still making it possible for people to connect to. I like how you used your room as a metaphor, as that helps people relate to the poem
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent poem, your uses of emotion and feeling made this one of my favorite poems. I enjoyed reading it, and thought your use of intense wording like "survive", and "dark depths" made this an emotional, and amazing poem. Amazing work!
ReplyDeleteI think your poem showed a lot of emotion and it also showed something a lot of the readers can probably relate to, it gave us a small personal insight to your life and it shows how people lock away their feelings. Very deep, Nice job =)
ReplyDeleteThis poem made me so sad...the last two lines are really vivid, and they really work to allow the reader in. When I was young, I needed a lot of attention, and to this day, I need a lot of attention. My wife Martha is very different, and really enjoys time to herself and being by herself. As a result, I do things to make her notice me, and so I get the weird feelings that come with being ignored by people you love. This is really a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteLucy this is an amazing poem like many other people I can relate to this this is a really good poem and you should keep doing this amazing amazing job
ReplyDeleteI liked how you described your reality and how you don't get much attention. I could relate to this because when I'm ignored, I feel really sad. Good job describing how you felt, but you seem like a very outgoing and funny person, I don't see how you could be ignored. I loved your poem! Great job Lucy!
ReplyDeleteThis poem allowed me to undergo what you feel like sometimes. It brings back memories when I feel disappointed in myself, but everyone can connect to it. Great job!
ReplyDeletebeing the older child it seems like I dont have that connection but there are some times when my parents just completely forget about me because they feel like my sister is the more important one in those situations. but alot of the time my parents ignore both of us but to help us do better in life. Your poem was nice and I liked the concept of it
ReplyDeletethis makes me fell sad becuaase people dont acknowladge your aive and that must be hard
ReplyDeleteThis poem was amazing, it was quite a sad tone. I think it showed a deeper part of your thoughts and feelings showing how you lock them up.
ReplyDeleteThis really had a deep meaning to you, which helps the reader understand what you're saying. First of all, thank you for expressing this sad, vulnerable part of yourself to us through your poetry because that couldn't have been easy. This kind of gives me a sense of depression which is really hard to express to others and it shows a side you don't usually show to others.
ReplyDeleteI can connect with this one because my parents often say they love me but then they act differently and my brother is always the center of attention and i am always just the outcast in the family even though i love them to death.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really deep poem and gives me a understanding of you that i never expirenced
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