The language of your poem made me think about how I waste time much too often. It's very hard to describe such an abstract concept, but it's done well here. This description evokes a lot of self-refection. Good job!
I really like this poem because soooo many people waste their time doing things that they might regret or don´t want to do. Time only cares about moving forward (like you said). I also really like the figurative language that you used to describe time by itself, such as personification.
I enjoyed this poem because it expresses the idea that time waits for no one and you better off spending your time on people and things you actually care about because you on live forever. When you waist your time your giving away a part of your life that you can get back.
Meygan, this poem is OUT OF THIS WORLD! Like I can't even express this enough that my fingers are twitching like a robot that is out of control! This poem deeply expresses the amount of time people waste and gets people to reflect on the amount of time they wasted, and that evokes great feeling and emotion at the same time. Additionally, I love how you move from a dark side (the time wasted) to a more happy time (which is ending that bad habit). Overall, great poem!
This poem is dope, and reminds me of my mom. I thought I would have all the time in the world to hang out and be with her, and then one day I woke up and went about my day, to sadly learn that hers had ended. I have felt many a time in the moments that followed that time had no regard for me, and your poem really helps me remember the important things to attend to in life...thank you. I had been resisting reading your poem to look for others, but I decided to click on it as part of my initial 8...there's a reason why everything happens.
This is really good and i think everyone can relate. I tend to waste a lot of time doing nonsense when I could be productive. Like yesterday when i could of been doing homework all day but i spent it watching teen wolf (i don't regret it though).
The language of your poem made me think about how I waste time much too often. It's very hard to describe such an abstract concept, but it's done well here. This description evokes a lot of self-refection. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem because soooo many people waste their time doing things that they might regret or don´t want to do. Time only cares about moving forward (like you said). I also really like the figurative language that you used to describe time by itself, such as personification.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this poem because it expresses the idea that time waits for no one and you better off spending your time on people and things you actually care about because you on live forever. When you waist your time your giving away a part of your life that you can get back.
ReplyDeleteMeygan, this poem is OUT OF THIS WORLD! Like I can't even express this enough that my fingers are twitching like a robot that is out of control! This poem deeply expresses the amount of time people waste and gets people to reflect on the amount of time they wasted, and that evokes great feeling and emotion at the same time. Additionally, I love how you move from a dark side (the time wasted) to a more happy time (which is ending that bad habit). Overall, great poem!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is dope, and reminds me of my mom. I thought I would have all the time in the world to hang out and be with her, and then one day I woke up and went about my day, to sadly learn that hers had ended. I have felt many a time in the moments that followed that time had no regard for me, and your poem really helps me remember the important things to attend to in life...thank you. I had been resisting reading your poem to look for others, but I decided to click on it as part of my initial 8...there's a reason why everything happens.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good and i think everyone can relate. I tend to waste a lot of time doing nonsense when I could be productive. Like yesterday when i could of been doing homework all day but i spent it watching teen wolf (i don't regret it though).
ReplyDeletei like how you tell how time has kept going even though people have no regard for it.
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