I love how you related your poem to ice cream and how it taste. You did a great job following the criteria for a Tanka poem by making the first three lines an image of ice cream and the last two, about how you fell when you eat ice cream. Well done!
I thought this poem was really good! I like how you related it to your feelings on ice cream and how it tastes to you. You did a good job with the imagery. I liked how you described ice cream's creamy texture. Great Job Sasha!
I love how you used more than one sense, so it was not just taste, but also texture. This helped me imagine the picture you were painting in this poem. This was a really great poem, and I feel like everyone could relate to this!
You brought a lot of visuals through your writing. I enjoyed reading about how you experience ice cream and how it makes you feel. Your poetic language allows the reader to understand and feel each aspect of ice cream.
Your poem was very relatable and you did a really good job creating an image and talking about how ice cream makes you feel. It appealed to multiple senses. Great Job Sasha!
This is very relatable for me, as I love ice cream.
ReplyDeleteI love how you related your poem to ice cream and how it taste. You did a great job following the criteria for a Tanka poem by making the first three lines an image of ice cream and the last two, about how you fell when you eat ice cream. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI thought this poem was really good! I like how you related it to your feelings on ice cream and how it tastes to you. You did a good job with the imagery. I liked how you described ice cream's creamy texture. Great Job Sasha!
ReplyDeleteI love how you used more than one sense, so it was not just taste, but also texture. This helped me imagine the picture you were painting in this poem. This was a really great poem, and I feel like everyone could relate to this!
ReplyDeleteYou brought a lot of visuals through your writing. I enjoyed reading about how you experience ice cream and how it makes you feel. Your poetic language allows the reader to understand and feel each aspect of ice cream.
ReplyDeleteI think everyone can relate to this poem because everyone eats ice cream. I like the way you described the ice cream, It made my mouth water.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very relatable and you did a really good job creating an image and talking about how ice cream makes you feel. It appealed to multiple senses. Great Job Sasha!
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