I like how you used figurative language to describe your thoughts! You have a lot of thoughts some god but some bad. I really like this poem because I can imagine what it looks and feels like in your mind. Great Job!
This is an extraordinary poem, I think of these flowers as sunflowers when you say 5'6, and then I remember you are much taller than me. You have a great way of expressing yourself in that your thought are wildflowers and wildflowers spread so I can see why you are in art, your thoughts are endlessly creative and beautiful.
Your poem was very nice and it brought a lot of emotions and feelings to the readers mind. You also described how you feel sometimes i felt like i was inside you brain just seeing and sensing what it was like inside of your thoughts.
I like the detailed descriptions. It feels like i am there, even though I am actually at school on a couch. I also liked the figurative language. You blew away my expectations for your poem.
I think that this poem shows a lot of thinking and uses alot of figurative language about your life. To me i think the wild flowers could e a play on words for a wild but deliquette mind and the endless weeds shows tough times. Great Poem
I thought your use of figurative language was good, and the use of the words wild flowers really made this poem hopeful and brought a sense of happiness, and imagination.
I really liked how you described your thoughts as wild flowers and also how you wrote this in a way that it can be interpreted in different ways. Your emotion when writing this came through and it created an almost worried emotion for me. I can tell this has a personal meaning to you which makes it really special for me to read and experience it.
This poem really expresses the way you see yourself. You see yourself as a rare and beautiful thing full of life when you are surrounded by millions of people who are just rotten and ugly (referring to the personality), which is a very good thing. At first you set the tone and describe the scenery and then get into your personal feelings which perfectly follows the pivot in the 3rd line. I enjoyed reading and getting to dig into this poem.
I like how you included the feeling you have of the ground and why you have these feelings. I can connect to my mind escaping me because when it does I lose all focus and what I am listening to it goes straight through my head into one ear out the other
Dang! All I can say is that this poem really explains you and your personality with the world and i like the way that you brought out this poem... Good job!
Your poem was amazing, Nikki! It really reflects your personality in a new way and the last two lines (metaphors) were amazing. This would be the poem to really dig deep on! Great job!
I like how you used figurative language to describe your thoughts! You have a lot of thoughts some god but some bad. I really like this poem because I can imagine what it looks and feels like in your mind. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteThis is an extraordinary poem, I think of these flowers as sunflowers when you say 5'6, and then I remember you are much taller than me. You have a great way of expressing yourself in that your thought are wildflowers and wildflowers spread so I can see why you are in art, your thoughts are endlessly creative and beautiful.
ReplyDeletei like how you used figtuive lanuage and described your self as a flower and all of the things in your mind like flowers and also weeds
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very nice and it brought a lot of emotions and feelings to the readers mind. You also described how you feel sometimes i felt like i was inside you brain just seeing and sensing what it was like inside of your thoughts.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem because you used a lot of figurative language and when you put that with everything else it really blended well.
ReplyDeleteI like the detailed descriptions. It feels like i am there, even though I am actually at school on a couch. I also liked the figurative language. You blew away my expectations for your poem.
ReplyDeleteI think that this poem shows a lot of thinking and uses alot of figurative language about your life. To me i think the wild flowers could e a play on words for a wild but deliquette mind and the endless weeds shows tough times. Great Poem
ReplyDeleteI thought your use of figurative language was good, and the use of the words wild flowers really made this poem hopeful and brought a sense of happiness, and imagination.
ReplyDeleteyour poem was really good,i liked the part where you said that your thoughts where as wild as wild flowers
ReplyDeletewow nikki that was awesome i love how you talk about how your thoughts are like wild flowers they seem to grow everyday amazing job nikki
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described your thoughts as wild flowers and also how you wrote this in a way that it can be interpreted in different ways. Your emotion when writing this came through and it created an almost worried emotion for me. I can tell this has a personal meaning to you which makes it really special for me to read and experience it.
ReplyDeleteThis poem really expresses the way you see yourself. You see yourself as a rare and beautiful thing full of life when you are surrounded by millions of people who are just rotten and ugly (referring to the personality), which is a very good thing. At first you set the tone and describe the scenery and then get into your personal feelings which perfectly follows the pivot in the 3rd line. I enjoyed reading and getting to dig into this poem.
ReplyDeleteI like how you included the feeling you have of the ground and why you have these feelings. I can connect to my mind escaping me because when it does I lose all focus and what I am listening to it goes straight through my head into one ear out the other
ReplyDeleteDang! All I can say is that this poem really explains you and your personality with the world and i like the way that you brought out this poem... Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour poem was amazing, Nikki! It really reflects your personality in a new way and the last two lines (metaphors) were amazing. This would be the poem to really dig deep on! Great job!
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