I can relate to this poem and how you feel because when i wake up in the morning i look at the mirror and just see this very flawed person instead of this brave, gorgeous young woman. Society has changed and girls and boys are becoming more insecure ( like myself ) when they should be proud of being different and even weird. This poem i think can relate to millions of people all over the world. It expresses this feelings of prosperity and reality. I really enjoyed reading it and relating my experiences to it.
This is a really good poem because it tells the truth about society and it connects to our generations experience today. This is a topic that pretty much everyone can relate to as everyone seems to find a flaw in themselves. This is an amazing poem!
This poem is amazing, I love how you were able to write it in a way that the reader can also connect to. This is a real problem that is happening so reading this I felt connected, but also terrible that this is the world we live in. This poem has so much meaning, great job!
This is a really good poem! I like how you expressed the feeling of being trapped and it really made me feel it with you. It's super descriptive and I can picture everything that you are trying to scream. The brokenness you add to the piece really sticks with me.
I can personally relate to this poem because i am always insecure about stuff im to fat im to skinny im to tall im to ugly. So it really showed me and reminded me of how other girls can feel even thoughtsome girls are really pretty we all have our insecurities and this world has gotten so mean that instead of lifting us up thy push us down and make us believe even further that we are worthless and not pretty or smart.
This poem seems to be in conversation with Amarria....I would agree that the mirror is the devil and typically only magnifies our flaws. Also poignant is how you extend this idea of the mirror to human beings and society, who also make us feel judged and less than. I wish I had some words of encouragement, or a different way to see the experience, but I think it's something I have struggled with, both as someone who judges and someone who is judged. The poem helps me acknowledge my role in perpetuating the problem.
Brittany, this poem was expressing the truth on humanity. Many people face pain for beauty when they need to express their true selves on the inside, because layers of makeup cover layers of skin that protect your identity that some people want to keep hidden. Great job!
I love how you portrayed how society has all these standards and how sometimes people feel as if they don't fit in and how there's no way they can feel as if they do. Very deep, Nice job =)
I enjoyed reading your poem and it can be related to by most. I could understand how the world seems to focus on the things that are wrong with someone instead of the things that are amazing. I think maybe people would be able to find beauty in the world if the could only get past what they see.
I see this poem as everyone is trying to ook their best but there are always some flaws and people always try to impress others for competition and to get more people to like them and this is a constsnt trend because no one wants to look bad.
Brittany. this poem is amazing! I love how you portray what others think of people and society as a whole as you paint an amazing picture of society and what society thinks about people. It does have a soft spot in my heart, and that rarely happens with poems.
I really liked your poem! I liked how you related it to the real world and how it can't be changed. It's very deep, and I also like how you keep your identity hidden. Good job!
Your poem has a lot of truth to it. I loved how you pointed out how beauty standards in society pressures people to look a certain way. These standards change the way people view themselves and can make them feel insecure. I was able to connect with this poem because I have struggled with this too. Good Job!
This poem was amazing, the second line was very powerful and It made me think about a lot. When you said, "with the faces of mirrors", I wondered if you meant a familiar face, or your face, since mirrors are reflective. This turned the feel of th poem to a more deep and meaningful thought, excellent work!
Your poem was great, it talked about how much people judge each other based on how they look or act. It showed how people do not always care about how others feel when they say hurtful things. It took quite a sad turn on the last line when you said it could never be fixed, but maybe that is true.
I can relate to this poem and how you feel because when i wake up in the morning i look at the mirror and just see this very flawed person instead of this brave, gorgeous young woman. Society has changed and girls and boys are becoming more insecure ( like myself ) when they should be proud of being different and even weird. This poem i think can relate to millions of people all over the world. It expresses this feelings of prosperity and reality. I really enjoyed reading it and relating my experiences to it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good poem because it tells the truth about society and it connects to our generations experience today. This is a topic that pretty much everyone can relate to as everyone seems to find a flaw in themselves. This is an amazing poem!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is amazing, I love how you were able to write it in a way that the reader can also connect to. This is a real problem that is happening so reading this I felt connected, but also terrible that this is the world we live in. This poem has so much meaning, great job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good poem! I like how you expressed the feeling of being trapped and it really made me feel it with you. It's super descriptive and I can picture everything that you are trying to scream. The brokenness you add to the piece really sticks with me.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is like extremely good because it expresses the truth of society and human nature. Great job on this!
ReplyDeleteI can personally relate to this poem because i am always insecure about stuff im to fat im to skinny im to tall im to ugly. So it really showed me and reminded me of how other girls can feel even thoughtsome girls are really pretty we all have our insecurities and this world has gotten so mean that instead of lifting us up thy push us down and make us believe even further that we are worthless and not pretty or smart.
ReplyDeletei like how you talked about being inscure but thats not a good thing and how so many peopel can relate to being insure and then overcoming that
ReplyDeleteThis poem seems to be in conversation with Amarria....I would agree that the mirror is the devil and typically only magnifies our flaws. Also poignant is how you extend this idea of the mirror to human beings and society, who also make us feel judged and less than. I wish I had some words of encouragement, or a different way to see the experience, but I think it's something I have struggled with, both as someone who judges and someone who is judged. The poem helps me acknowledge my role in perpetuating the problem.
ReplyDeleteBrittany, this poem was expressing the truth on humanity. Many people face pain for beauty when they need to express their true selves on the inside, because layers of makeup cover layers of skin that protect your identity that some people want to keep hidden. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI love how you portrayed how society has all these standards and how sometimes people feel as if they don't fit in and how there's no way they can feel as if they do. Very deep, Nice job =)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your poem and it can be related to by most. I could understand how the world seems to focus on the things that are wrong with someone instead of the things that are amazing. I think maybe people would be able to find beauty in the world if the could only get past what they see.
ReplyDeleteI like how you bring in a really big issue in society and how many people have many standards for a certain type of person amazing job
ReplyDeleteI see this poem as everyone is trying to ook their best but there are always some flaws and people always try to impress others for competition and to get more people to like them and this is a constsnt trend because no one wants to look bad.
ReplyDeleteBrittany. this poem is amazing! I love how you portray what others think of people and society as a whole as you paint an amazing picture of society and what society thinks about people. It does have a soft spot in my heart, and that rarely happens with poems.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem! I liked how you related it to the real world and how it can't be changed. It's very deep, and I also like how you keep your identity hidden. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour poem has a lot of truth to it. I loved how you pointed out how beauty standards in society pressures people to look a certain way. These standards change the way people view themselves and can make them feel insecure. I was able to connect with this poem because I have struggled with this too. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteThis poem was amazing, the second line was very powerful and It made me think about a lot. When you said, "with the faces of mirrors", I wondered if you meant a familiar face, or your face, since mirrors are reflective. This turned the feel of th poem to a more deep and meaningful thought, excellent work!
ReplyDeleteYour poem was great, it talked about how much people judge each other based on how they look or act. It showed how people do not always care about how others feel when they say hurtful things. It took quite a sad turn on the last line when you said it could never be fixed, but maybe that is true.
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