This is an interesting play on words about your phone and how it keeps you awake its not only you there are very many people that struggle with a phone addiction.
This poem was great, the way you described your phone was interesting, and the intense word usage made this poem powerful. This was very creative, great work!
I love how this poem is about the struggle of modern technology (i have the same addiction youre chill) and how it can keep you awake because you dont want to stop. Nice job =)
amazing job at first i was confused to what you were talking about but the second time i read it i understood i love that you were able to talk about your phone without saying it
The language you used in this poem helped me visualize what your talking about. I get what your saying. Technology has changed peoples life and how it can effect kids in school or trying to do something.
The language helps me visualize the behavior of the subject without having to know what it is, which helped me experience its behavior.
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting play on words about your phone and how it keeps you awake its not only you there are very many people that struggle with a phone addiction.
ReplyDeleteThis poem was great, the way you described your phone was interesting, and the intense word usage made this poem powerful. This was very creative, great work!
ReplyDeleteI love how this poem is about the struggle of modern technology (i have the same addiction youre chill) and how it can keep you awake because you dont want to stop. Nice job =)
ReplyDeleteamazing job at first i was confused to what you were talking about but the second time i read it i understood i love that you were able to talk about your phone without saying it
ReplyDeleteThe language you used in this poem helped me visualize what your talking about. I get what your saying. Technology has changed peoples life and how it can effect kids in school or trying to do something.
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