Whoa, Jackson this is super deep. I love how you've taken something everyone goes through and put into your own words and you did it really well it looks like this was really easy for you amazing job
This poem is so deep it is hard to interpret the meaning, because your ears will pop before you can get so far under the water to get the meaning. I can relate this to seasons in Chicago because one day is warm and the next day as sharp as a needle cold.
This poem pretty raw which is great in poetry and it explains experience in the world as being a human... and overall, this poem is just super well written and exciting to read.
There is a lot of meaning of the text in your poem and non-figuratively I can relate to it as living in Chicago. From a figurative standpoint it was cool how you were able to use that language.
You express your point of view on time and how one should spend it or what happens because of the decisions you make during it. This poem brings out the good and bad things in life and how one has to deal with them. I think that everyone can relate to this poem.
I personally think that your poem is about how each day is different and you don't know what its going to be like until it happens. Its really deep and i can tell it actually came from your thoughts, Nice job )
this really shows your views nd ideas about time and the world and how people wil switch up on you so fast makin that day bad but you never know what will happen in the next
This poem shows lot of meaning and effort and a real sense of how the world is constantly changing. What makes it even better is how can convey your whole message through figurative language.
I really like this poem because you describe how different your days can be from each other, and I really love how you connected it to weather. You can still remember each day like it was happening, even though you cant go back. I love the figurative language, Good job!
This makes me think of the weather in Chicago
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Whoa, Jackson this is super deep. I love how you've taken something everyone goes through and put into your own words and you did it really well it looks like this was really easy for you amazing job
ReplyDeleteThis poem is so deep it is hard to interpret the meaning, because your ears will pop before you can get so far under the water to get the meaning. I can relate this to seasons in Chicago because one day is warm and the next day as sharp as a needle cold.
ReplyDeleteMy understanding of your poem is that evry day is very different because you never know what is going to happen untill it does.
ReplyDeleteThis poem pretty raw which is great in poetry and it explains experience in the world as being a human... and overall, this poem is just super well written and exciting to read.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of meaning of the text in your poem and non-figuratively I can relate to it as living in Chicago. From a figurative standpoint it was cool how you were able to use that language.
ReplyDeleteYou express your point of view on time and how one should spend it or what happens because of the decisions you make during it. This poem brings out the good and bad things in life and how one has to deal with them. I think that everyone can relate to this poem.
ReplyDeleteI personally think that your poem is about how each day is different and you don't know what its going to be like until it happens. Its really deep and i can tell it actually came from your thoughts, Nice job )
ReplyDeletethis really shows your views nd ideas about time and the world and how people wil switch up on you so fast makin that day bad but you never know what will happen in the next
ReplyDeleteThis poem shows lot of meaning and effort and a real sense of how the world is constantly changing. What makes it even better is how can convey your whole message through figurative language.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you contrasted the lines it felt like weather kind of..
ReplyDeleteYour poem was good, it talks about how everyday is unpredictable and you don't really know what's going to happen next.
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem because you describe how different your days can be from each other, and I really love how you connected it to weather. You can still remember each day like it was happening, even though you cant go back. I love the figurative language, Good job!
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