This Tanka is interesting I can relate because I live right by a freight train that´s always going back and forth. Does this have to do with that you live right in the loop and can see the train station?
The imagery in the tanka helps me visualize the train in the described setting, making me think of an train taken to get away from something that's been bothering you. Great poem!
I think this poem really shows that you have a sense of adventure and how you just want to get up and go sometimes. im pretty sure a lot of people can relate to this. Nice job =)
The imagery in the tanka helps me visualize the train in the described setting, making me think of an train taken to get away from something that's been bothering you. Great poem!
This Tanka is interesting I can relate because I live right by a freight train that´s always going back and forth. Does this have to do with that you live right in the loop and can see the train station?
ReplyDeleteThe imagery in the tanka helps me visualize the train in the described setting, making me think of an train taken to get away from something that's been bothering you. Great poem!
ReplyDeleteI think this poem really shows that you have a sense of adventure and how you just want to get up and go sometimes. im pretty sure a lot of people can relate to this. Nice job =)
ReplyDeleteI think that this poem tells alot about where you live and how you live near trains and how that effects you.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery in the tanka helps me visualize the train in the described setting, making me think of an train taken to get away from something that's been bothering you. Great poem!
ReplyDeletei did not understand your poem at all and i don't understand why you waat to get on a train so bad.Do you have a connection with trains.
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